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Thursday

Writing Lesson

Today you will be using the lesson off bitesize on 'proof reading' to help you with your writing from yesterday.

 

During yesterday's learning you wrote the next part of the story 'New York is falling!'. Using the information from BBC Bitesize, proof read your learning and make some changes to what you have written. 

 

Task 1: Watch the videos from Bitesize

-Understand the importance of proof reading

-It is important to re-read and check your writing so it makes sense

 

Task 2: Have a go at proof reading your own writing 

-When you have proof read your writing have a go at improving it and extending your vocabulary.

 

EXTRA CHALLENGE: Can you add some speech into your part of the story?

 

 

REMEMBER to send your learning into your teacher on the school email:

year4@wilnecote-junior.staffs.sch.uk

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